wonders.

Everyone wonders
It's nature, it's real.
We're people;
We love, we hate,
we feel.
What's still to come?
What have I missed?
So many wonders,
they can't all fit.
We don't know what's certain,
we don't know what's false.
Imagine a life without
He who knows all.
Our wonders will come,
and won't all be solved.
But Someone hears wonders,
He's hearing them all.
Look to the future,
Remember the past.
Life is uncertain. But
heaven will last.

Reviews

[Snug Bug]

Wow, how much I loved this! Very talented in poetry!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Wow... The poem flows very smoothly, the rhyming is immense-this writing is just flawless. Although I don't like what the poem is about and it's concept, I can see past that because this is very beautifully written. Keep up the good stuff!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was really full of rhythm.. very lyrical in beat. I usually would find the repetition of the same word in rhyme "all" to be off but it works with the message here.. the final lines were superb and full of meaning.. life is uncertain.. and I do believe heaven will always last.. that is infinite! Thank you so much for sharing.. full of wonders and inspiration!

[SN]

beautiful write! I really appreciate the simplicity through which you expressed it all, and through which you summed up "life". Thanks for sharing, this was very smooth to read

[Soul Magic✯]

beautifully written. you have a wonderful talent with the pen. i enjoyed reading this piece *smiles*

[A Lone Creative Nomad]

This one may just be your best...

[AllyKinzz:)]

This so far is my favorite. I like the ending lines. "Life is uncertain. But heaven will last." And if im not mistaken, "heaven" should actually be "Heaven".

I love this one it speaks the truth. Good job.