'Pebbles'

Some moments are magical

Act 1
Room

Mute glasses & a glass bowl sniffed the fresh air,
lamp hiding behind the curtain treasured cushy drops.
Tired books reclined to receive nature's grace,
& colors on the bed sheet smiled at one another.

Outer layer of the Square glasses on the Wooden door,
teased the inner layer for its delightful moments.
Wall brackets & the chair, silently chuckled,
on the rascality of the otherwise sad outer layer.

Then in one magical moment the room laughed in chorus.

Act 2
Painting

Jilted by her camera, she revolted with jolty strokes,
Rough surface spoke volumes of this war within.
Multicolor tears gave away the yellow & browns,
& a breathing flower was born with white petals.

Her telephoto & wide-angle laughed at this unusual
image, of an unfamiliar world she wanted to live in.
The tripod calculatively deciphered the flower,
& found it mathematically superior than the photograph.

After 3 drinks she forgave her camera though . . . . .

Reviews

[.]

. three drinks is all it took ? ... i know someone who wouldn't forgive their camera after three hundred and thirty three ... or maybe it's always a matter of the right camera angle ... either way ... this is a brilliant piece of poetry ... plus ... i always agree with em ...

[April Child]

Bizarre and beautiful at the same time. Really enjoyed the description of the room and how you give life to the inanimate.

[littlelilypurplebride]

Strange yet very unique love how the colors and imagery come to life here nice work very different though. god bless lily

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such creativty in this poem! BEAUTIFUL!!1

[Lilly Negoi]

ok, it's official, i'm falling in love with your writing style :):)

[Bette]

beautiful...

[Erin]

In your second stanza, the weird capatilization thing was going on, but that didn't distract me from how good it was. Word choice, word choice, word choice. You have such a sophisticated and magical way with words. It's odd, really, but it's also incredibly....it makes me jealous. Nice job.
PBP

[Ruth]

Such ebb and flow here :)
Excellent detail too, really vivid, surreal and click! All settled once more! lol
Awesome poem love
xx

[em]

- and yet again - everything's alive - everything's buzzing - everything's speaking volumes - and the laughter is ringing in the night's air - not only do you capture the magic of magical moments - you bring it to life - make it spin and turn - make it dance and swirl - make it beat - in the pulse - of the rarity of this moment - and the potency - of those three drinks!!!!

[Bubo]

What a stunning piece.....so much captured in a camera, in ones mind.........I love the detail you created, and the depth.....wonderful!