Weeping Fears (Collab with Shorty's Poetry)

My first collab

(Shorty's Poetry)

The road is long and dark,

I can feel the winds blow 'cross my heart.

Trying their darndest to rip right through,

Leaving me empty and not knowing what to do.

 

The scene is so ominous,

Tearing at my consciousness.

I am driven to the brink of insanity,

But I only react to it passively.

 

(Shorty's Poetry)

Wanting to run and hide,

But wanting to stand and confide.

But I am dripping in sweat and tears,

And among all my worst fears.

 

I didn't used to be like this,

But now this has become my bliss.

Living all my days in fright,

Only weeping through the night.

Author's Note

My first collab. Half credit to Shorty's Poetry :)

Reviews

[Anna]

This is amazing!

[Joan*Eckhart]

I like how descriptive it is emotionally. The fear and loneliness shine through. A good poem.

[R.M. Duchene]

I love these dark little pieces :)

[teardrop]

i read shorty's verison, they both look great. Nicely written both of you.

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

Chilling and darkly beautiful. Excellent!

[Dark Rider]

Okay, I am not the best person to review poems, but this was good! Nicely done, to both of you. :)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Amazing!! That's all I can say! :P

[The Fallen]

This is amazing! Loved it

[MandaBear]

Very good!

[Forever Hidden]

O__O
You used my title!!! :'DD Such an honor XD

[Westminster Abbey]

haha, yeah, you should definately be honored :)

[Westminster Abbey]

btw, the next chapter of Reality is up :)

[Forever Hidden]

I'll hcekc it out soon :)