December.

I've got a crush on Jack Frost...

December.

 

December, Oh silver December,

Oh, the Joys you dare to bring!

For Jack Frost, my Love,

Comes only on your Wing.

 

So creative is he,

Making fern-frost on my glass.

Oh, the fun we’ll have,

Until December comes to pass.

 

But until then, we sing,

‘May the winter bring you bliss,

May your holidays be happy,

And grant your every wish.’

 

‘For December is a miraculous time

That conveys us every Wonder.

There is nothing to detest,

Even breathtaking Winter Thunder.’

 

I am in love with this winter Sprite;

My heart races when he’s near.

Memories frozen in time,

I know there’s nothing to fear.

 

December, Oh silver December,

Oh, the Joys you dare to bring!

For Jack Frost, my Love,

Comes only on your Wing.

Author's Note

Just a thing for winter that I wrote in like an hour. Probably not good, but tell me what you think anyway.

Reviews

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Very well done...joyous poem!

[Calibaster]

I think this is great, do you really like Jack frost? The rythym was skewed a bit in some places, but other than that, it was great!

[Westminster Abbey]

Well, not actually. He is, after all, a mythological sprite. But I remember ever since I was a little girl, I was intrigued by the idea of him. But no, I do not actually have a crush on Jack Frost.

Thank you for your review! :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this! It gets everyone in the spirit for Christmas and all of the merry joy! December I'd have to say is the happiest month of the year! All of the presents bought, trees and decorations put up, smiles across many kid's faces, and most importantly the celebration of Jesus's birth. You actually wrote this in an hour? Wow, you're truly talented! You have an outstanding vocabulary and word structure! Great job! :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[That1Nerd23]

I love this! Honestly, I just adore everything about this poem! Wonderful job!!!

[Westminster Abbey]

Thank you for the review! :)

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome!

[Krista Weiss]

Aww!! Really cute!! Great job!! :)

[Jordan's Back]

i love the wonderful imagery in this, Its comparing "Jack Frost" to a lover and the Romanticism of the Month makes it playful loving and innocent. Excellent write

[Westminster Abbey]

Thank you! I'll review the rest of your album in just a minute! :)

[Jordan's Back]

no worries :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow... This was amazing! I just love the flow and the creativity! :)

You wrote this in an hour? You, my friend, have a gift. :)

[Westminster Abbey]

There was supposed to be a picture in the begining, not the same one as the title, but I couldn't get it in there for some reason.

Thanks :)

[Felicity's Eve]

For the record, I like the picture. ^^

[Westminster Abbey]

Yeah, I couldn't decide between two pictures, so I wanted to put both, but for some reason, it's not working! Ugghh. Oh well. The picture by the title is an example of the fern-frost I mentioned in the poem. Glad you like it :)

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Forever Hidden]

Ohh I live this Abbey! I mean live not love! Agghhh dang auto correct -.-

Anyways, I really like this poem!

[Westminster Abbey]

haha, thanks :) I appreciate it. :)

[Forever Hidden]

I think this poem is gonna be popular =)

[kublakhan27]

I won't say I love him but I do love winter more than most people :P This really captures the celestial feel of the season...great job^^

[Westminster Abbey]

Yeah, I don't actually have a crush on him. He is, after all, a mythological creature. I mostly just added that for the poem's sake. However, I have been quite intrigued by the thought of him since I was a little girl.

[Westminster Abbey]

And thanks for the review!

[kublakhan27]

Haha I know, I was just trying to be witty :P You're very welcome :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Very well-written poem. I agree with Raya Rose it flowed beautifully. 100/100 :)