December.

I've got a crush on Jack Frost...

December.

 

December, Oh silver December,

Oh, the Joys you dare to bring!

For Jack Frost, my Love,

Comes only on your Wing.

 

So creative is he,

Making fern-frost on my glass.

Oh, the fun we’ll have,

Until December comes to pass.

 

But until then, we sing,

‘May the winter bring you bliss,

May your holidays be happy,

And grant your every wish.’

 

‘For December is a miraculous time

That conveys us every Wonder.

There is nothing to detest,

Even breathtaking Winter Thunder.’

 

I am in love with this winter Sprite;

My heart races when he’s near.

Memories frozen in time,

I know there’s nothing to fear.

 

December, Oh silver December,

Oh, the Joys you dare to bring!

For Jack Frost, my Love,

Comes only on your Wing.

Author's Note

Just a thing for winter that I wrote in like an hour. Probably not good, but tell me what you think anyway.

Reviews

[Eliott]

Wow I like your word choices; very descriptive :)

[ken burke]

very good poem very well written

[Con O'Clast]

This is cool, that old school, defined structure almost makes it nostalgic without ever having read it before (that didn't make much sense but I hope you get what I mean :) ). There's a sort of epicness to it that makes it seem like a precursor to a fantasy adventure or something. Nice work.

[Westminster Abbey]

Thanks! I think I get what you mean :)

[h cingisiz]

First poem I read since I joined writers cafe, very beautiful and creative. Love the angle of being in love with Mr Frost as a symbol of your love of winter.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like it. I stumbled a wee bit in the flow once but recovered nicely. Here's the lines that gave me pause,"‘For December is a miraculous time
That conveys to you every Wonder." I think if you changed the second line to "That coveys us every wonder" it would flow better. Idon't know. But I enjoyed the read nonetheless. I'm a winter baby myself. Got a birthday this month.

[patricia]

This was so lovely. Your use of silver in its description did it proud. I could see the patterns the beautiful frost made, especially the pattern you conveyed to us through your fingertips and beautiful mind. Enjoyed.

[PurpleQuartz]

Amazing poem! Your writing flowed and sounded beautiful.

[PP]

Nice work Abbey, never liked December, guess I've changed my mind now:) thank you

[Westminster Abbey]

Glad to help, haha :)