Forever Sky

My first poem. It's probably not good

I find it strange to say that the sky goes on forever.

In a way, when you look at the sky, you are looking at that forever.

It's too far away to see.

But at the same time, it's right in your face.

Author's Note

This probably isn't any good, it's my first. But tell me what you think anyway, I love constructive critism! :)

Reviews

[.]

I never thought of that but it is true, somehow it actually follows us. :D 100/100

[Westminster Abbey]

Thank u!

[.]

:D no problem

[Amanda J. S.]

This is really good! Very well said, and it can symbolize a whole bunch of things....
It can ex. symbolize the mind :-)

[Westminster Abbey]

Thank u!

[Amanda J. S.]

we aim to please :-)

[Soul Fire]

I like the idea,you need to work on it.but good job! Keep writing! :D