Lunar Eclipse

senryu for the recent lunar eclipse...from Red's perspective

~Crimson hunter's moon~

~Rises in her dark brown eyes~

~Like lust's bright fever~

Author's Note

Inspiration from nature...

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

now THIS is what I am talking about.. it is spicy, enchanting, and skillfully seductive.. the imagery in my head right now, oh yes!! well done girl.. I absolutely LOVE this.. favs!!

[redflutterby]

Lol....well i know I got it right if you like it!! Yep I definitely was going for seductive imagery! Grinning from ear to ear!!

[AprilRN1210]

oh yes ma'am, you SURE did that.. it is tucked away in my library.. that says something:)
smile.. it is A.W.E.S.O.M.E..

[redflutterby]

Wooweee.....happy dance!!!

[AprilRN1210]

*giggling* @ you girl..

[icelandicblue]

A lusty mood imbued in this gorgeous senryu. A full blood moon connotes all sorts of carnal whispers.

[redflutterby]

Yes...carnal is the perfect word. Thanks so much Anne!

[Einstein Noodle]

it is a fever ;) what a spectacle ... so cool to watch and read your senryu ..
E.

[redflutterby]

Definitely have a fever here...whew! Lol. Thanks for sharing in my spectacle!

[Latifa]

good poem, but I think it's suppose to be a haiku , cuz haiku are maint for nature but senryu are more about humour or human nature

[redflutterby]

It could be taken as both...since the emphasis is more on the females response, metaphorically speaking it refers to the nature of lust. Thank you for reading it.

[Latifa]

thank you for the info

[redzone]

Yep, from nature, but haiku nature or senryu nature, does nature "lust "?? just saying .. lol Andrea me thinks there's a "hunter's moom in your blood ...danger danger beware senryu in area ... lol. Can you tell i love your poem!!!

[redflutterby]

Hahaha...i would say this was is senryu nature!! And yes lust is a part of nature...at least Reds. Lol..
Thanks Curt...always my pleasure!

[redzone]

Has to be that "red moon " spell you are now under. Perhaps you should sign this one Lustfully yours ... :-p

[redzone]

Nice to know you are under the influence again ..;0)

[ron]

WOW I love this one RED.
Although I didnt see it last night I did feel a lot of energy running through me.
Very well penned as always.

[redflutterby]

Well. hey there stranger!! Glad you enjoyed my foray into the seductive hunters moon. ;-)
Thank you!!!

[ron]

Hello stranger ;)
You are most welcome.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, this is sexy, sensual, and decidedly RED.

[redflutterby]

OH YES....it is!!! Lol....I was decidedly inspired by the lunar eclipse among other things. ;-)