Lunar Eclipse

senryu for the recent lunar eclipse...from Red's perspective

~Crimson hunter's moon~

~Rises in her dark brown eyes~

~Like lust's bright fever~

Author's Note

Inspiration from nature...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how you turned this event of nature into that subtle quest of the woman hunting for her man...

love senryu...to say it in so few words and allow the reader to find his or her own moon.

j.

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I really, really like this.╰☆╮

[Poetic Beauty]

Nature is amazing. Love these few short lines.

[TL Boehm]

and this is an exquisitely penned perspective.

[WILDERNESS]

captured beautifully..................... it is enchanting, the crimson moon, and lustful.............. v nice

[Rita L. Sev]

Of course you would be inspired by the blood moon! A hot little senryu here, Red!

[LadyAnn68]

Wow~ amazing how jsut afew simple words can have such impact just as any lunar eclips wold. Bravo.

[redflutterby]

Thank you so much...I appreciate you reading my work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW, this is fantastic senryu…. Ilove the moon and night and your description of the eclipse is delightfully chilling.

[redflutterby]

Thanks Cowboy...its inspired by a certain man.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well he must be one hell of a man to inspire one hell of a lady.

[redflutterby]

Time will tell....but so far he has inspired me in many ways. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I wish I could inspire someone like that.

[redflutterby]

A www...sweet Cowboy I'm sure you can. Just need to find the right one!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I try to keep the faith that I can but hope is on life support.

[redflutterby]

Sigh....stay positive Dale!! Hugs.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks, I will try… maybe I am better off alone.

[Pryde Foltz]

Wow … the words and the picture are jaw-dropping in their expression and effect on the reader. I would like to have seen the man who inspired this piece.

[redflutterby]

Lmao.....he is quite impressive himself! Thanks Pryde...

[Pryde Foltz]

Hahahaha … I thought so.

[redflutterby]

.......;-D