Making Ammends

Making Ammends

A Poem by redflutterby

Letting go of old angers
Trying hard to see the light
Making brand new choices
Keeping the goal in sight
I never said I was perfect
No point in trying to be
I'm paying for my mistakes
Just wish you would see
Time moves ever onward
At an unforgiving pace
Only so many chances
To put love back in place....

© 2013 redflutterby


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acceptance of one's own misgivings is the greatest hurdle. perception and humbleness are the key. forgiveness is only a minor part of the equation. we need to forgive ourselves for our transgressions against those we swore to love and protect, then, and only then can they forgive and move on. beautiful sentiment herein. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

11 Years Ago

You are so wise Quin and i agree. Finding peace within ones self is so important!! Thank you. ;-D
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

essential!



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I like the grace and forgiveness in this, a precious sentiment and faith.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Thank you Michael...and i am adding you as a new friend!!
Michael Kevin Spencer

11 Years Ago

That is fantastic news, but I think I beat you to it :P
redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Yes you did...lol!!! Approved!!
acceptance of one's own misgivings is the greatest hurdle. perception and humbleness are the key. forgiveness is only a minor part of the equation. we need to forgive ourselves for our transgressions against those we swore to love and protect, then, and only then can they forgive and move on. beautiful sentiment herein. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

11 Years Ago

You are so wise Quin and i agree. Finding peace within ones self is so important!! Thank you. ;-D
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

essential!
Turning over a new leaf and forgiveness, two huge obstacles in life. Mistakes, especially the kind that stay with you are a hurdle for sure....

'Time moves ever onward
At an unforgiving pace'

Ain't that the truth? Nicely pen'd.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda... sometimes it feels like our legs aren't long enough to make it over those hurdle.. read more

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"Indifference and neglect often do much more damage than outright dislike.~J.K. Rowling" "It has been said, 'time heals all wounds.' I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind, protecting.. more..

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