Making Ammends

Letting go of old angers
Trying hard to see the light
Making brand new choices
Keeping the goal in sight
I never said I was perfect
No point in trying to be
I'm paying for my mistakes
Just wish you would see
Time moves ever onward
At an unforgiving pace
Only so many chances
To put love back in place....

Reviews

[quinfinn]

acceptance of one's own misgivings is the greatest hurdle. perception and humbleness are the key. forgiveness is only a minor part of the equation. we need to forgive ourselves for our transgressions against those we swore to love and protect, then, and only then can they forgive and move on. beautiful sentiment herein. well done!

[redflutterby]

You are so wise Quin and i agree. Finding peace within ones self is so important!! Thank you. ;-D

[quinfinn]

essential!

[redzone]

From my own experience, sometimes even making amends does not always mean getting love back .. .. I was forgiven but the love was lost .. you express this longing for forgiveness with poetic honesty, something many are unable or unwilling to do .. ~~redzone

[redzone]

From my own experience, sometimes even making amends does not always mean getting love back .. .. I was forgiven but the love was lost .. you express this longing for forgiveness with poetic honesty, something many are unable or unwilling to do .. ~~redzone

[Buddhistboy73]

This piece is honest, simple and to the point. And for that reason, it captured my attention.
You can feel the compassion at the heart of this poem, and also the feeling that there are "only so many chances to put love back in place"....
Thanks for sharing...this has reminded me of where I am, and what I would like to change.
BB

[Deuces]

Wow. I'm going through this right now. You said it all here... imperfection is imperfection. Holding onto that venom can be very self-destructive. Perfectly put!

[Rhianne Ney]

This is a great fleshed out poem, feelings are real key points in creating masterpieces like these, aren't they?
You've done a job well done with this since it was really something that I can relate on also. Though, I can't relate with the love part if it's for a boyfriend but if it's for a friend or family then sure i can (:

~ Keep writing~

Rhianne Ney

[jacob erin-cilberto]

time moves at an unforgiving pace, but that is no reason people can't forgive each other and move on from whatever caused the pain.

i like your writes...kind of an in your face style that really works.

[redflutterby]

Thank you Jacob. When I write poetry it usually comes from a personal experience or deep conviction. Always appreciate reviews and I will check out some more of your work. ;-)

[P. Kapper]

This speaks so loud and clear to me! This is a situation I am not wanting to be in, but finding no other way. I've never read a poem that spoke so directly to me!! Fantastic and thank you for writing such a beautiful, poignant piece

[redflutterby]

Thank you for such an amazing review....I'm touched!! Glad you stopped by!! :-)

[PurpleQuartz]

This was really really good!!!

[redflutterby]

I'm glad you liked it...always appreciate the comments!

[s y e]

Mistakes that stick with you are hard to forgive and even harder to forget. Sometimes sorry just doesn't do it for people. It's the same as not everyone gives 'second chances.'

This was a very good write. I enjoyed it, very well written cuz! xox

[Holly Mason]

like the fact that forgiving has a pace but it is still present
I had to know what was behind that title
put love back in place-so true
thank you for sharing

[redflutterby]

Your very welcome. Thank you for reading it. I will check out some of your writings to!!