Love- a sonnet

I was once told I am a natural at sonnets, which is quite ironic since I've never been in a relationship.

With eyes of warm, silver grey

Staring deep into my own,

My love is here with me today

Be I never alone.

Caring fingers caress mine,

Sharing all I am

Together or alone we dine,

Our signs are of the ram.

Here we start our legacy

Working day and night

Making bonds of empathy

Doing all things right.

Onward, never ending

Greatness ever pending.

Reviews

[C. Rose]

"Greatness ever pending" is clever.
"Making bonds of empathy doing all things right" is interesting.
I like Shadow Stealer, The Tale of Eden, and Happyness more.

[Sam]

Together or alone we dine, Our signs are of the ram. Excellent words. Can I steal this one?

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very awesome.. :)