this is a song i wrote

There are no words deep enough for this song.

As I lay here and try to find the words,

 I realize there's no easy way to explain it. 

Why cant I under stand these feelings deep inside?

  How did I get so cold?  How did I get so lonely?

 I need someone to really be there for me.

  Because when I feel like this I just want to scream,

 I'm in so much pain.

  I wanna scream. I wanna cut.

 I wanna see the blood. I wanna feel the rush. 

 As i read these words I'm starting to get it.

 I understand that it's not always my fault.

Why did i think that?  How could i be so wrong? 

 I'm thinking now maybe I was wrong all along. 

 Because i felt like if i didn't scream. 

 If i didn't cut there would be no way for me to express my hurt. 

 Now when i play this song I look back and see the old me.

She's standing there with blood running everywhere. 

 And as I see her I am so happy that I'm not her any more.

Author's Note

let me know what you think. all comments appreciated, Thanks for the comments.

Reviews

[vampireprincess]

this is good

[Numb]

A quite gripping song indeed. Excellent job. Do you have a title for it? Anyway, you really do have a thing for writing songs.

~N~

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. I like the movement and the ending. Hard to realized we are on the wrong road. We must get off and find some calm and peace. I like the ending. A strong poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[loowzerX]

cool style. love it

[Cherrie]

change this from story form to verse and stanza, I liked it very much. :)

[~Lizzy♬]

I really feel the pain in the story. I am hoping that this didn't actually happen to you. You need to become a song writer.