Now that your gone

Now that you're gone

It's too dark at night.

It's canstantly cold

And nothing seems right.

 

Now that you're gone

It hurts to be alone.

I cant stand here without you

Afraid and on my own.

 

Now that you're gone

my world means naught.

I'm sorry for what i said

And all the times we fought.

 

Now that you're gone

I cant seem to find my smile.

I didn't think i'd lose it yet,

At least not for a while.

 

Now that you're gone

I cant help but yearn

For the love that we had,

And the day that you'll return.

 

Now that you're gone

And have left me behind.

I'm losing my focus

And have already lost my mind.

 

Now that you're gone

Nothing else will matter.

Each day i'm without you

My heart won't cease to shatter.

 

Now that you're gone

All it does is rain.

The heavens seem to weep

As if they feel my pain.

 

Now that you're gone

I just want to cry.

Because I curse that night you left

When we had to say goodbye.

 

Now that you're gone

I noly want one wish.

For you to come back

And give me just one kiss.

Reviews

[Vaishali..^_^]

omg..!! such a beautiful write..:)
thanks for sharing..^_^

[Marlena]

This is so sweet and sad, and you have a nice flow here. Very nice, and cute, great work :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

OMG< This is absolutely adorable. I also think that many people have felt like this and can relate to the poem. Wonderful write.

[red_saphyre]

the 3rd line from the bottom is supposed to say I only want one wish. Thank you all for your reviews!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel and the emotion of this poem. I like the flow. Could be music. We want what is gone always. Common sense take time to grasp and to be use. I like the last line. A very strong poem. Experience teaches us to hold on tighter when the love is good. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[vampireprincess]

VERy good thumbs up