Horses

from march, inspired by Rose

Monica chased a stable boy

caught up to him

bet on the 5th

Monica met a stable boy 

a bouquet of roses

a bundle of joy

It was

a rose for a rose

and a damn pristine dose

of endearment for only

showing up

and taking a shot

It was

a thorn in a throat

that farewell run

and a ton of money for that

5th but

Monica met a stable boy

incomplete, no more

she looked home in the eye

she told him

 

He had other horses to tend to across town

as did Monica

(I bet on the 45th

I went to a flower shop up town

I took it all in

only now that I’ve thought 

about abundance 

deliverance 

and

roses

do I admit

I miss him)

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Of horses and love combined so evocatively in a sensational way. This is super cool i bet , im sure. Thumbs up!

Hi, so nice to read from you again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem here, titled, "jumbo jets vs jackdaws ..". Such interaction is my way to say hi to poem pals.

[redalia]

thank you!
i'll do that soon as i can x