I loved reading this... it was like watching a staccato film, in ever switching freeze frames.
I will say; I find it quite difficult to engage with a lot of writers' pieces on here. It's one of the reasons I don't always comment.
I'm not a massive fan of really wordy poetry (that's not to say it's not an art form or talent!).
You manage to make a real impression with even a smattering of words. It's a real talent I think. There's more to creative writing than seeming as though you've swallowed a thesaurus; it's about the repetition and rhythm, the visuals of the words on screen/paper; the ability to create a scene from very little. Minimalist poetry?
It's very powerful, anyway.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you, i really enjoy writing this type of poetry, like showing someone a bunch of photographs a.. read morethank you, i really enjoy writing this type of poetry, like showing someone a bunch of photographs and letting them take from it what they will.
I'm not a fan of really wordy poetry either, most of the time it sounds pretentious to me. but yes, it's still a respectful art form, even though it's not everyone's cup of tea. less is more sometimes.
thank you so much for the lovely words, i really appreciate it! and thanks for reading!
I laughed at this poem. Its easy to read, flows well and tells a story. Oh, and witty! Things can conspire to drive you mad every so often. Your line 'the mind was torn' sums it up well.
Good work.
regards, Alan
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review!
I loved reading this... it was like watching a staccato film, in ever switching freeze frames.
I will say; I find it quite difficult to engage with a lot of writers' pieces on here. It's one of the reasons I don't always comment.
I'm not a massive fan of really wordy poetry (that's not to say it's not an art form or talent!).
You manage to make a real impression with even a smattering of words. It's a real talent I think. There's more to creative writing than seeming as though you've swallowed a thesaurus; it's about the repetition and rhythm, the visuals of the words on screen/paper; the ability to create a scene from very little. Minimalist poetry?
It's very powerful, anyway.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
thank you, i really enjoy writing this type of poetry, like showing someone a bunch of photographs a.. read morethank you, i really enjoy writing this type of poetry, like showing someone a bunch of photographs and letting them take from it what they will.
I'm not a fan of really wordy poetry either, most of the time it sounds pretentious to me. but yes, it's still a respectful art form, even though it's not everyone's cup of tea. less is more sometimes.
thank you so much for the lovely words, i really appreciate it! and thanks for reading!
the upsetting part is that it seems the best we can do is almost never enough. thank you so much (ag.. read morethe upsetting part is that it seems the best we can do is almost never enough. thank you so much (again!) for reading!
6 Years Ago
yes...it sure does sometimes feel that way ... not giving up becomes an answer in itself ;)
6 Years Ago
you're right. well, that was motivating to me, thank you Einstein