Take Me!

the pinning ...

Take Me!

Let thy sword upon me crash
Arrows upon me fall,
That I shall be slain, Alas!
From thy heart, that thralls
Me every moment’s pang
Every single breath,
Why thy kisses, kiss me not ?
Take me! Take me!
Death.

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[olla]

and here I thought I had read all of your work.. were you holding out on me..??

[Recherche]

oh no, holding out not- this work is an old one, many years ago... ty kindly for viewing , smiles

[olla]

oh you know I had to find my way back.. I just hadn't seen you on line yet.. I hope you are well.. I think I may have already mentioned it..

[Chris]

Valhalla awaits - the thunders and lightnings call... and the sheer NEED to answer draws and draws.

[Recherche]

thank you very much .. appreciate your review and comments

[Chris]

Your "voice" was compelling.

[emmajoy]

' Why thy kisses, kiss me not ? ~ Take me! Take me! '

Dramatic theatre here. words to literally die for. Yet, somehow I wonder if your words have more personal a meaning.. hopelessness, helplessness, perhaps.

[Recherche]

thank you kindly for your delightful comment- i appreciate you!

[HadesRising]

Sounds very Macbeth like. As easy mayst thou the intrenchant air With thy keen sword impress as make me bleed: Let fall thy blade on vulnerable crests; I bear a charmed life, which must not yieldTo one of woman born ...

[Recherche]

wow ty soooooo much , funny, as much as ive read in my life, never read Macbeth