The Within

we were from darkness, thrive in darkness and end in such

           The   Within 
 
I  bide within an inner lone
Where no one views such sorrow ,
My unkenned wae of merriment
I seethe within - And loathe the morrow.
This unrelenting, to Nothing’s bane
That I of passion - discern ;
I gaze in utter discontent
On those, who such not burn. 
A  yearn for utmost, ever thus
But oh, what unkind breath
In turn, not serves forevermore 
But fades to unjust Death -
And then, within Inearth’s decay
I bide - unto an inner lone ,
As it was in lucidness -
Again in darkness thrown !
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Author's Note

hope you enjoy

cheers

Reviews

[Leo]

Well written and a deep poem. Sophisticated choice of words. Well done

[Recherche]

i appreciate your comments deeply -- thank you so much for reviewing !!!!!!!!!

[Chris]

Warrior borne to await and await and live within the stillness - so out of place and time.

[Recherche]

thank you chris- i surely appreciate your review , cheers

[olla]

I am not sure how I missed this one..

the older I get the more I grieve for the loss of time for joys untasted while so many dally in the trivial.. life is indeed too short..

[Recherche]

thank you for your comment young lady - i indeed revel in your reviews ... have a delightful day

[olla]

I am going to have to re-explore and make sure I haven't missed any other treasures..

[Wondering Mind]

Very nice flow, not forcing the rhyme scheme.. loved the classical lexicon.
Well penned

[Recherche]

sorry for the late reply... however, thank you kindly for the lovely review ... you are the tops

[HadesRising]

I like the tone of this poem. Also well written. Well Done.

[Recherche]

i wholeheartedly appreciate your nice comments - thank you kindly!

[Edie Blue Starfish]

It feels like a darkNess setting in and yet it is not threatening so much as it is inviting.

[Recherche]

thank you kindly for your delightful words , I appreciate YOU