The Lor

an older poems about One's ever on end pining for Edenic's Love....

          The Lor

 

This Horrid, Horrid, view portends

O misery!  Thy breath is wae;

How to lang for Merriment's merriment -

Thru Gethsemane's day !

Must we bide in Noisome's song

A destined- Ballad's gaze of doom,

The ghastliness of Being's fray -

From Penance's womb!

Waiting til that final breath

Where light and dark repine,

One other bitter fey of mirth

Unbodied- Immured and maligned!

A saddened, dismal, throe of stay

No tears can harbor grief,

How unkind is Life's decay-

But ah, the shades of Hope's beliefs.

And ever thus to by and by

From Moment's lonely birth,

All of Love's unending horror-

Shall culminant, inearth. 

      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

              11-17-16

                      ew

Author's Note

hope you enjoy!

cheers

Reviews

[olla]

and what do I find here.. how we long to stay distracted by the joyful noises of life while trapped in this garden of woe.. is this not the sister to our last conversation..

[Recherche]

i dont have a sister, that i know of... perhaps a distant cousin , 2nd cousin at best --hardeharhar ty kindly for your heartfelt comment me sweet

[olla]

or cousin or 2nd cousin.. at least a related thought stream.. you are very welcome.. I find your work as awe inspiring as you seem to find mine.. maybe I am the sister you didn't know you had.. yuckity yuk yuk..

[Recherche]

ok sis, hope you dont believe in the bible , if u get my drift

[olla]

some of it.. unfortunately.. it's an incomplete work.. so I haven't been able to read the whole thing..

[Recherche]

the only true way to discern the old and new testament is to have the rare ability to read and write the old Hebrew and Greek language , what they were written in, so much is lost in translation,such as it was in Montezuma.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Wow – superb wordplay, creating an atmosphere of surprise and imagery of dismay; at the loss of an unspoilt and idyllic embodiment of perfect love. The law broke love into a human tragedy ... great write... :-)

[Recherche]

omg..thank you so much for such an"over the top" review.. i am humbled by your comments- once again , thank you kindly Phill

[Recherche]

hey phill oz - thank you so much for the delightful comment and i wholeheartedly appreciate YOU

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend .. a pleasure to read your work... :-)