The Death Cry ( current series and in progress)

The Death Cry is a new series of poems in terms of how one views, feels, and discerns Imminent's Inearth quietus...the horror!

            IX

 

Here we go again my friends

My foe of Death bewails,

Ere lucidness, upon me panged

Life before me failed.

Breathing in a sea of dearth

My dreams on waves belied,

Even thru the shades of merriment-

I cried.

Now within a Senescent view

My forest barren- burned;

What a dismal wae to wither

Disillusioned, but unconcerned.

Author's Note

please enjoy- I indeed hope I don't cause any displeasure with anyone-

Reviews

[olla]

this is really very good.. I read it several times.. "what a dismal wae to wither
Disillusioned, but unconcerned." this is a great line.. I understood it perfectly.. I wish I could find my way to the "unconcerned" part..

[Recherche]

i truly and wholeheartedly appreciate your kind words and review thank you so much

[olla]

I was delighted when I discovered YOU on a midnight weary.. sometimes the forces of the universe lead us to little treasures when we need them the most..

[Alan]

Dang Gum! You sure got a lot of 50 cent words in there. LOL. JK. I enjoyed this muchly.
I think the fact that you felt you needed to apologize for potentially causing 'displeasure' for anyone is a testament to who are as a person. What I mean is; you write like you don't give a f**k but you still have concerns for what others think.
Two words, F**K THEM.

[Recherche]

i dont know where time has gone and how i missed this review , i apologize ... thank you so much for your review and comments , it means a lot to me