Necrosis

" Necrosis,my latest work consisting currently of CXXXIV poems ( in progress).Necrosis is about waxing and waning from a Childhood's hour through Secenscent's view"

 

        XXII

 

And ever thus, loneliness abides

O Gethsemane! Thy solus seethes,

Even thru Edenic's pize

I breathe.

Ever though , my day is sorrowed

My night unfurls abrade,

Hence my quest is everlasting

Laden thus, it fades.

And so abounds this loneliness

Edenic's dree belied,

Why did Eros in me breathe-

When Eos in me died.

Author's Note

I indeed appreciate you! enjoy...

Reviews

[olla]

your way with classical language is stunning.. I have been to the dictionary several times.. each time enriched both with my understanding of your beautiful work and with your beautiful work.. once again I find your closing so perfectly understood.. "Why did Eros in me breathe-
When Eos in me died." why do we awaken when dawn is almost gone..

[Recherche]

whom ever you are,wow and wow ... your review is absolutely beautifully phrased and well written to say the least,,, thank you so so much olla , i indeed appreciate YOU!!!

[olla]

you are very welcome.. for one who is approaching that final breath much faster than I would wish your work has been like a tonic.. I know there are some who would disagree but death is not always curse.. and your beautiful poetry has reminded me of that..

[arcandon]

this is really good
it's kind of classical

[Recherche]

thank you kindly - i appreciate your delightful comments- smiles

[arcandon]

no problem