F**k Me in Verses

the original version

i.
   
Touch me in verses      
In lines,      
breaks  and spaces      
In commas         
dots and dashes,      
Think of me
in my    
barest      
      
Then feel me deeply          
with your mind           
and senses...          
           
ii.   
    
Love me in verses      
In haikus,       
quatrains      
or sonnets      
With a pen         
and a sheet of paper      
Open up        
your mind,       
heart       
and soul      
      
Something you've            
never really          
done before...            
      
iii. 
  
Or why don't you just         
f**k me in verses?      
Talk dirty to me         
in free verses      
or old fashion       
proses       
With your mind,   
I want you to explore       
what's in between       
my legs      
in an iambic      
pentameter      
      
Do it good,             
then you'll have me              
rushing in your bed            
after...      


Written by Kasandra (tidalnymph)  
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Published 11th December 2010 00:06am  Last modified 19th July 2011 1:23am 

Reviews

[rebellefleur]

@Jack Heslop-- thank you sir for the wonderful review, much appreciated.

[Jack Heslop]

The original and the best. Presented in clean and elegant chapters which form an erotic whole. If it weren't for the mountains of unarguable proof already provided the structure you use here would infer this as yours. The line breaks and chapters prove your intimate knowledge of how this poem should be organised, which thoughts stand alone in separate verses. It's tidy, quiet and filled with an intelligent passion, which Virgin Poet misunderstood when she reposted it in big bold type, all as one verse.

[rebellefleur]

Sadly this poem was plagiarized on this site. If you're one of those people who hate plagiarism as much as I do, please feel free to help me take the plagiarizing b***h down. http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/VirginPoet/659866/