F**k Me in Verses

the original version

i.
   
Touch me in verses      
In lines,      
breaks  and spaces      
In commas         
dots and dashes,      
Think of me
in my    
barest      
      
Then feel me deeply          
with your mind           
and senses...          
           
ii.   
    
Love me in verses      
In haikus,       
quatrains      
or sonnets      
With a pen         
and a sheet of paper      
Open up        
your mind,       
heart       
and soul      
      
Something you've            
never really          
done before...            
      
iii. 
  
Or why don't you just         
f**k me in verses?      
Talk dirty to me         
in free verses      
or old fashion       
proses       
With your mind,   
I want you to explore       
what's in between       
my legs      
in an iambic      
pentameter      
      
Do it good,             
then you'll have me              
rushing in your bed            
after...      


Written by Kasandra (tidalnymph)  
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Published 11th December 2010 00:06am  Last modified 19th July 2011 1:23am 

Reviews

[wordman]

well it is a erotic write to say the least,i have touched you with my mind
I have felt you for such a long time great write

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

http://lingerie-lyrics.blogspot.com/2007/12/f**k-me-in-verses.html

I wrote this on Monday, December 3, 2007

and you ... @http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12019/
Published 11th December 2010 00:06am Last modified 19th July 2011 1:23am

[PJ]

Ur so f*****g pathetic ur a plagiarizer this was written by Samantha
I even posted this n my blog several years ago so whatever

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

oh and I have even written a part 2 to this called "F**k Me In Ink"

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

funny, yes you have it posted on d.u.p but I had it posted here 4 years ago and it was reviewed http://www.writerscafe.org/VirginPoet/reviews/received/?&p=238 but the webmaster accidentally deleted it and all the work I had posted here and a lot of other poets work and besides here is further proof ....

http://www.melodramatic.com/node/5378349

April 27th 2009 http://allpoetry.com/poem/5284541-Fuck_me_in_Verses_-by-VirginPoet

http://www.melodramatic.com/users/virginpoet/2007/dec/15/f**k-me-verses

http://www.melodramatic.com/node/4855010

@ Jack heslop you dont know jack s**t!!! its just your opinion, but that dont make you right and all she did was change how I wrote it and that dont prove authorship now does it

this poem has been copy-written

[Alessander]

f*****g someone in iambic - I prefer f*****g in tetra and reflecting in iambic lol

nice write. the gritty tone comes through.

[orginality]

She has your poem here as well.
http://www.writers-network.com/index.cgi?m=1&view=133447

[jes]

I could have said it no better than Jack has. It was a beautiful flowing effort like the sway of a woman's hips, that catlike approach with this structure and form. Well done, milady.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words alive and strong. You make poetry come alive and powerful. I enjoyed this poem. Words should excite the soul and mind. A outstanding poem.
Coyote