Trapped

Stuck. Trapped.

They will never let me out.

The walls close in,

Blood runs thin,

As they watch my slow death.

 

WHITE FLAG!

Surrender!

Let me out!

Can't you see?

Please let me free.

 

They watch.

 

Eye's become black,

I'm stuck in a trap,

face becomes white

My heart goes tight.

 

Trapped

And slowly dieing.

Trapped

And always crying.

 

 

Author's Note

Okay so I don't know if I like this or not.
But i was just thinking about all the relationships that I am trapped in, friendships.
And well I just can't seem to leave.
I don't know if i like this poem or not!

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Don't know why you wouldn't like this piece, the tone and the voice even gives the reader a sense of claustrophobia, the frantic need to get out of the emotional prison, as well. I think it's a great poem.

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nice

[ICE]

I didn't flow as well as I thought that it could've...but I completely get what you're saying about being trapped. I've had friendships that i just felt as if I couldn't get out.