Dreams

Suddenly it feels claustrophobic, like you can barely breathe in,
Suddenly the toxicity of the mundane life clearly screams out and in,
Suddenly there you don't even find the meaning of living a mechanical, bossy life ;
Suddenly it just kills you inside ,
And you go out under the open sky ,
With the eyes that have once seen what you really want in subconscious ,
"Dreams" ,
They don't turn to dusts.

Author's Note

Hope you can relate,people . :)

Reviews

[David Marsden]

Well, I think most people can relate to this, especially me as I have been around a while. Life can and will be bad at times, but if you stay the course it gets better, just like the wheel of life says.
It seems that you like to express your deep feelings freely. This makes writing come alive, especially poetry. If you put your soul down as the written word people will read in wonder.
keep on writing.

[Sriparna]

I will.:) thank you for reviewing it .

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Wow, lovely write. It has been written and presented very well.

[Sandra Nair]

people can relate,Sriparna.write more,seeing a strong writer from India.

[Sriparna]

Thank you very much :)

[Sandra Nair]

You are welcome!

[Grant Redford]

I like how the imagery progresses. It is claustrophobic, then it is toxic, then bossy, eventually it kills you inside. Then you go out under the open sky, it seems to me, a free space, and they are "dreams" in quotes, not dreams but now the real thing. So I like the progression.

[Sriparna]

Thank you for reviewing it.

[Rev. Jr]

Deep. Inspirational. I felt your pain. Be encouraged to write more. You have a story to tell and you have our attention.

[Sriparna]

Thank you a lot for reviewing it.and ya of course i will. Glad that you liked it.