A Sunrise at Dusk

Written by: Rebecca Rouston and Alex Minito

Star crossed, unaware of what to come and hopeful
The clocks not waiting, headed Westbound on the road
Messing with the means of light and sound
The map and the tracks directing them where to go
The breeze filled the air with a serene welcome
A perfect contrast to the tepid envelopment around our heels
Curiosity inspired the pursuit of the inevitable
A simple gesture assures how the other heart feels
As the sun sets before a long awaited peace of mind
And the tide advances over the prints of passerby's
It was as clear as the sky and stars that night
That we would succumb to this bliss for the rest of our lives
 

Reviews

[krish]

wow........so preety..if u don't mind then can i'va say sTH to u;)
let's ve a look below..........;)
''EVERYDAY WHEN THE SUN BECOME DUSK,
I REALLY LOVE IT;S THAT DUST,
COZ...AT THE TIME OF DUSK,
I ALWAYS,READ A BOOK & WRITE INTO MY WORD'S,
WITH A WARM TEA WITH A HOT CUP,
COZ...THIS IS THE ONLY TIME WHEN I STAY ALONE &
FEEL MY ALL POSITIVATIONS FROM MY HEART,
COZ...THIS IS A WORLD OF DELUSION THAT MAKES EVERYONe'S ONLY HURT,
SO,I ALWAY;S USE MY EXPENSIVE TIME WITH A THINKING; THAT MAKES ME SO BRIGHT LIKE A WHITE SHIRT,
LIKE A PHOTON'S GIVES LIGHT BIRTH,
I WANNA A B A THAT ONE STAR+LIGHT; THAT SPREADS IT'S LIGHT+SUNSHINE IN THE WAY TO PROVIDE A RIGHT PATH ON THIS EARTH.............."
COZ...IT'S MY SUNSHINE AT DUSK.....DUSK...& I WANNA FEEEL IT FROM MY HEART.....MY SUNSHINE DUSK..........."

[Alex Minito]

I'm glad I was able to write this with you babe. I love you.

[Silvario]

This is so pretty!
LOVE the last line :)
Now this one made me smile ear to ear simply because you and your co-author paint such a perfect, happy moment! Beautiful.

Not sure how off I may be, but I pictured two people just meeting, or just beginning to fall in love, standing on a beach with the water just at their feet, sharing a moment >.<

Great write :)

[soliloquy]

I love bridges! (the photo)

I appreciate the collaboration with this one. I would tell that you have your fingerprints on this....and yet anothers are there too.

This is an intelligently done write....

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

The bliss of togetherness........a beautiful collaboration