Certified

With the stance of a sinner

The breath of a master

Possessing a lethal weapon

Against the innocent by-stander

I'm inhaling a liquid

Feet planted down firm

The entry into subconsciousness

Away from all here

Touches with a fluidity

A bachelors in deception

I've been trained by monsters

Consistent with internal resistance

These moves will prevail

We are certainly unsure

Just as soon as the clicks reside

New life will find a way out

Reviews

[Silvario]

Love this one! It reminds me of the main character from my story >.<
I could see this piece as the heart of some psychological thriller story/movie.
A peek inside a troubled mind ... or perhaps, a peek inside the mind of a genius o.O

As always, very creative and well penned :)

[Joanna Johnson]

I love the way you used the words together. It invokes two things happening at once, a little bit of complexity that can be applied to anything in life. I like the flow of the poem too.

[soliloquy]

You appear to be an artist. :0) These words flow expertly and your style is evident. I love your choices of photos to appropriately accent your writes and your words are so poetic and not predictable....almost random.......yet they fit somehow....that is impressive.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

thanks so much(: its my passion.

[soliloquy]

some can do it...some cant. I am much more of a story writer. They dont get read as much. :0(

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

yeah i wish i had the attention span for stories. i always say if i went to prison id read and write more lol

[soliloquy]

lol that is cute. I would as well... My attention span is also short....

[John Stussy]

Superb poem, it was sinister, had that warning of potential hazards but still retaining that glimmer of hope to it. Great job.