Elise.

From the moment I saw you

I knew I could like you

From the moment I looked into your eyes

I knew I could love you

From the moment I kissed you

I knew I could be with you

From the moment I heard your voice

I knew I could talk with you forever

From the moment I touched your body

I knew I could make love to you

From the moment I breathed you in

I knew I could place my life in your hands

From the moment I spilled my first tear for you

I knew I could hold on to you

From this moment, I'll see your face

And I'll know you could, too.

Author's Note

I literally wrote this in 5 minutes! Haha!

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

Great poem.
Short.
Sweet.
Well written & interestingly written, I like your style.
"From the moment I saw you
I knew I could like you" - Great opening lines. Such a simple statement yet it's something you don't hear everyday, so it makes it sound beautiful.
Great write, keep it up.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[Alex Minito]

nice.

[Glee]

Such a sweet poem, love at first sight.

[Jenna]

Its simple so of course you could write it in 5 minutes! But its not a bad simple its beautiful. Its just so breezy and flows and you can feeel the love radiating from it.

[John Stussy]

Beautiful poem of love, glad to see you so happy now :D She'll love it.

[Brandon]

Nicely done. Especially for a quick write.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

sweet nicely done for a quick write hope she enjoys it