I feel it's hard enough without making up my own words

lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off.

I wish i could express myself

What if I had a cure to breathing

I wonder what I could be

If messing up was harder than cleaning

Ive lost the ability to speak aloud

Ive lost the connection there

We no longer communicate

I don't even know where to stare

What if I never found you

Then I could seem to find the strength 

If I never knew the power 

Then the medication could never deteriorate

Everyday I hope to regain my sight

You're no longer holding the stick

For now I'm misunderstanding me

Trying to shut what should be open

Reviews

[Silvario]

A wonderfully penned look into a struggling soul.

"What if I had a cure to breathing"
Significant line here with potentially deep meaning. Very well worded.

I'm not great at decoding poetry. I can, however, see quite clearly how much of yourself, your soul, you put into your writing. Not to mention a great deal of talent. :)

[Steve]

Nice poetic words. Your writing has a sadness to it, yet a spark of life no doubt.

[Just me]

'what if I had a cure to breathing'

Such an interesting line to ponder.

[Alex Minito]

this shows your clever mind.

[Jordan's Back]

This poem has a unique depth. Its shows your inner struggles trying to find yourself and yet trying to find reality. This is a wonderful piece of literature. I love your last four lines:

Everyday I hope to regain my sight
You're no longer holding the stick
For now I'm misunderstanding me
Trying to shut what should be open.

Wonderful Write!

[K-mo]

This is really good