Composing me.

Composing me.

A Poem by rebeccarellis

The charm of calm, 
Hoped for, envisioned, and thus
Assumed.
Folded over and over into
A tiny square, 
So crushed and lost in
Pockets that the
Lies inside came in
Behind my eyes.

Oh, dreaded affections
Nursed from afar.
You are now me
More than forged and
Guarded notes;
Declarations to and of
The self.

The sadness of the rain
Wraps me up, 
Lets lonely fingers twitch.
Voices stew unheard
In an iron cauldron - 
Only to bubble over
Into the calm.

© 2012 rebeccarellis


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CM unfolds softly onto the page then builds to a quick boil and ends with a tranquil but energized bubble. Self exploration is a journey and this poem demonstrates that notion... I loved the 1st verse immensely... And the phrase:'Voices stew unheard in a iron caldron' expels out an excellent image of inner dialogue... Kudos!
LLR

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 13, 2011
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rebeccarellis
rebeccarellis

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