I Am A Ghost

Insignificant

Alone

Mysterious

Low-life

Invisible

Killed

Eerie

Absent

Grieve?

Honor?

Obvious?

Save?

Tell?

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very smartly done acrostic....and timely for the season...

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you very much. I was more trying to share emotions rather than be festive, but I appreciate the complement reguardless.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you very well captured emotion here....fall seems to be that time...the coming winter, it starts to get cold outside, but sometimes on the inside too...that was what i meant by timely...lots of depth gained by one word lines.

[Rebecca Pall]

Well thank you very much :)

[alifeacoustic]

I like what you have done with this. One word statements and questions into judgements people make without feeling the need to quantify them. Just judge and move on, without thinking about how they are too judged for the thoughtless stream of non thought garbage that pours forth from their mouth any time it is opened.

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you... I wrote it because many high school students, including myself, can feel excluded and judged, and sometimes there's no reason for that.