If I Was Enough

I know there's sort of a sad theme, but sometimes a writer has to share EVERYTHING that's on their mind

If I was enough,

Why did you tell me that it would just be a phase?

Not knowing now

That it is your love I crave

When I see you I melt a little inside

Especially if you're happy

If my love was enough,

I wouldn't feel so empty

Now you're with her 

And as great as that sounds...

I want to be that one

That you can wrap your hands around

I need to start over

Like a new slate

Keeping in the back of my head

That the time I had with you was still great

Reviews

[Princ3ss_26]

You admitted something so many hold in, the part where you stated, "Now you're with her
And as great as that sounds...
I want to be that one
That you can wrap your hands around" That takes courage. Although you wished so bad to still be the one he loved, you are letting out all that you feel as to a way to try to empty your mind of what was. Great write!

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your positive feedback! Feel free to review some of my other poems :)

[Princ3ss_26]

You are most welcome!

[Aphy!]

Something everyone who's had their hearts broken can relate to.
Deep poem hey

Aphy

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you very much :)

[Deborah G. Adams]

The ending sounds positive, like it!

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you :)

[Bella Day]

Beautifully written. Something a lot of us can relate to.

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you:)

[Yalixa]

amazing work, i love every single word that you wrote and yeah it sucks seeing someone you love/ or used to love with someone else.

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that

[alifeacoustic]

Seeing someone we love with someone new is further pain when we least need it. It hits when we are at our lowest point too, probably looking our worst through lack of sleep and comes like a bolt from the blue that pauses our very heartbeat.
I truly sympathise with anyone going through this. It is one of life's harshest lessons.
Great write and good that you ended on a positive note. We sometimes forget the good times when we are lost.

[Rebecca Pall]

I feel the same way, I tried to end it on a happy note so that I could at least try and shed some light on a sort of dark situation. Not that I even fully believe it myself, but when I look back at it, maybe it will change my perspective. Thank you again :)

[alifeacoustic]

You're welcome :)

[Xander West]

I like your work. You write from your emotions. That being said, just like my work, we need to go and smooth out the flow. Don't be afraid to share you sad or depression related works. They are emotions that we all feel and can relate to. I hope you keep sharing your work, I enjoy reading the emotions and feelings you portray.

[Rebecca Pall]

Thank you very much. I do have slight anxiety and depression, and although I don't have that be the main focus of all of my writing, it has somehow become more prevalent.

[Xander West]

And that is fine. I am quite happy, yet even tonight I wrote a poem completely revolving around depressing thoughts. Sadness, Depression, Anxiety are normal emotions or state of beings for us all. There lies a beauty in every emotion waiting to be captured by our words.

[Rebecca Pall]

I like your thinking :)