If I Could Change Anything

If I Could Change Anything

A Poem by Rebecca Pall
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Just the way I feel about school and with past lovers and friends

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If I could change one thing
About how I acted when I was with you
Would you perhaps take me back?
Would I finally be enough?
Tell me
If I could change one thing
About how you may perceive me
Would you let me know?
Key me in on how I would change?
Tell me
If I were to go away
Without telling anyone where or why I was going
Would you ask me to take you with me?
Wonder where I went, or not care at all?
Tell me
Am I perfect the way I am?
Do I meet all of your needs?
Do you get that rush of nervous energy as I walk in a room
Or feel a source of emptiness when I am gone?
Tell me
Tell me
It's so simple, yet so dismissive
How will I know if I'm enough?
How will I know if I have done you wrong?
All you have to do
Is tell me

© 2015 Rebecca Pall


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If you could change one thing, then you wouldn't be being your true self. Communication is the right answer, but only if it is two way. You can tell someone how you feel, but you can't make them listen.
Great write. I like the structure of it. Asking for those evasive answers.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rebecca Pall

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate it. Judgements can be rough though
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

They can indeed.
I can reaally feel it. I love this people can feel the same thing that you are feeling. You are an amazing writer so please keep writing. Also please review some of my work. Thank you have a good day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rebecca Pall

8 Years Ago

I would love to review your work... Thank you so much for your kind words, it really means a lot :)
Wannabewriter16

8 Years Ago

You are very much welcome and I hope that you like the work that I do.

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