Imagine If....

Imagine If....

A Poem by Rebecca Pall

Imagine if you were a small black ant
In the middle off a red ants
Not knowing where to go or stand

Imagine you were a caterpillar
Wondering where all of your friends have gone
As they had all turned into miraculous-looking colors

Imagine you're just right, the way you are
To someone, somewhere

Imagine the blushing cheeks of someone who's so excited by your simple presence
The warmth of someone who doesn't care about flaws or the past you
Every money is simple 
Passionate
Fresh
A new experience, waiting for you to jump in to its safe, warm arms
And take you on the most wild ride of your life

© 2015 Rebecca Pall


Author's Note

Rebecca Pall
I know the topic is kind of all over the place, I had a lot on my mind and the idea struck me as a good one
Pay attention to dialogue and the style in which I wrote the poem

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Beautiful. Surely that is what it should be like, but seldom is. No past, just the present and the future. I love the second verse, when you wonder what caterpillars think when they are last to transform. Such a beautiful thought, to put yourself in their shoes, so to speak.
Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rebecca Pall

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate that. I was thinking about these things and relating it back to my life right no.. read more
alifeacoustic

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)

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Added on October 27, 2015
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