Beautiful Music

Press the keys across the board,

Together we made beautiful music.

But now I've been left, a soloist once more,

The rush in my mind has slowed,

The idea's weakened.

Yet still in my head I hear you play

Beautiful music, our duet.

Reviews

[Tony]

The title drew me to this one-- I love music.
Yeees, you interweave the music imagery or sound imagery and the story of a relationship superbly here. A created a very enjoyable composition here.

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"Beautiful Music" Indeed :)
Great ending lines.
A symphony of a poem!!!

B/W

[Brittany W]

This is sad, the first two lines made me think this would be a poem of love, but as it turns out its a poem of lost love, great job on this.

[Alicia™]

This poem reminds me of a piece of writing I'm working on, so I can definitely relate to it. It's a beautiful thing when 2 artists come together. Though the length is short, I feel like you've said everything that's needed to say. Great job!