Foot Down

Congratulations, my little withered flower,

Twas about time you spoke.

I'm sad that it was still not with a vocal,

But it was 'something'.

I think it is funny how you think you've done something

That someone else might consider courageous.

I'm sorry to disappoint you with no care.

In the end though, my little flower.

You put your foot down,

Right into your mouth.

Reviews

[gravitylava]

This is cool, it's short and doesn't go on and on like an epic, but it's still got substance. Good write, I enjoyed it.

[PhantomDancer]

Cleverly written. I like "my little withered flower".