Fairness

Giving up, giving in,

Never wanting to fight.

No one seems to win..

..Story of my life.

No one stays, no one cares,

Giving up with blank thoughts,

Is this all very fair?

When no one even fought?

I've been left in the cold,

With no jacket around.

No one there, to hold,

My cold darkness surrounds.

I'm alone, in this life,

No one seems to care..

No one even fights,

Is this all very fair?

Reviews

[Jemma]

Life isn't fair. I have learn't that. It pisses me off. But it isn't fair. Meh. This poem was beautifully written. Seems like your speaking right to me. Very discriptive. and very well written.
Worth the read.
Great write.

[~Mary Ann~]

LIfe isn't always fair. But there will be someone who will reach out a hand and say hello. This ink is a discriptive piece of emotion and reminds the reader that everyone is human with a heart, a mind, and a beautiful soul. Well done. :)