You're On Your Own

Do you see what you did?

Do you see what you've done?

Have you really yet to learn this damned lesson?

No, of course not.

You choose to f**k up your life instead.

 

It's not like I simply chose to be heartless,

I was teaching you a f*****g lesson!

You don't take a hint, so congratulations,

You've now fucked yourself up to the point of

No Return.

 

You are so blind, so selfish.

I'd hoped in losing me you would learn

Nothing is forever.

And eventually you must learn to fend for yourself.

 

Life is a hallway, long and tedious,

All you want to do sometimes is reach the end.

You can see but one door at the end,

But on your way, like a hotel, there are side rooms.

Doors slightly or whole-y open, the accepted ways out.

 

However, suicide is not one of those ways,

And by committing it,

You damn yourself to return and relive it,

It is the way of life, my once friend.

 

Take a f*****g hint, learn a f*****g lesson,

Or I swear to you, you'll wind up

In a black abyss, impossible to escape.

Go ahead, damn your life prematurely.

 

You truly are stupid,

You'll NEVER understand,

You are not like people as myself,

FORCED into a black hole.

 

You went in search of that hole,

You weren't pushed, you jumped.

I am not an idiot,

You liked falling.

 

Life's not the story you aspire to have it, some fictional book,

If you want any form of decent living,

Listen to me now.

Stop.

 

Get over yourself,

'Less you like being him.

'Less you're ok with losing anyone who cared,

'Less you want to TRULY be alone.

 

Trust me, once friend,

I wanted you to lose your trust in me,

I WANTED you to learn: nothing is forever.

But you obviously can't take a hint,

You selfish soul.. You're on your own.

Now and forever.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

Brutal and powerful. I found that this peice might have been speaking to someone that was losing themselves to drugs while someone who cared watched the fall.

I find when ink flows from the innerself it often comes out more honest than anything else in this world.

Great Write!

Aaron Maycroft

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Very strong imagery. I enjoyed this so much!

[Cherryblossom]

Brutally honest. Brutally perfect :)