Dear Agony

Dear Agony,

How are you today,

Wandering in my thoughts,

Do you need a light?

It must be very dark..

 

Dear Agony,

Am I everything you thought I'd be?

Cold words and heartbroken,

Your perfect get-away,

Luxury hotel.

 

Dear Agony,

Does my confusion make you laugh?

Your own personal comedy act,

Pain, afterall,

Is the best form of comedy.

 

Dear Agony,

Please take your time,

You can't live here, but you'll be back,

Do me one favor though:

Leave a nice tip.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Ohh ,i swear that was like a blow on the head ,i passed away a little at reading this..
Dear agony how are you today wondering in my thoughts..need a light,must be dark down there
I am everything you liked,so broken ,your perfect hideout..luxury hotel..you are welcome
Does my confusion makes you laugh,have fun,its your comedy act,pain is your best place
Agony dear,take your time,you may not live here,but you will be back..
God what sad ,but very lovely write,how smooth ,calm and cynical..i just loved this
lovely write..

[Wunderlich]

Hah, this is great. I like the structure, and the last stanza made me a laugh a little. Excellent job :D