No one wants to die on a sunny day with blue skies And blackbirds singing in the trees No one wants to walk blindly in the dark But I can’t trust the news on my TV No one wants to drown in sorrow Or choke on a lifetime of regret No one wants to see that the Dream is no longer But no one can seem to forget
Cause they shake my soul like an old weeping willow Dig her a hole in the ground They said, shake her soul like an old weeping willow Lord, please… don’t cut me down
No one wants to live locked in a brain cell Too afraid to break out of their own mind No one wants to give up and bid life farewell Is this really what they meant by mankind? You know, our wars are never over No, they just rearrange the dates When will we stop believing their lies And realize all the pain it creates?
Cause they shake my soul like an old weeping willow Dig her a hole in the ground They said, shake her soul like an old weeping willow Lord, please… don’t cut me down Lord, don't cut me down
Wow I must say you speak in a deep tone I felt the words, people don't know what that means when you say I felt your words grasp my will, They set as a mountain and reach my span. I like how you used the weeping willow very much. I'm from Tennessee seen many willow tress grow here where water is and when the roots no longer have water they fall apart.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I'm currently living in TN, definitely a lot of inspiration here! Thank you for the review.
Cool what part? sure is go on a mountain take a look and than set back let it all come in:) your ver.. read moreCool what part? sure is go on a mountain take a look and than set back let it all come in:) your very welcome:)
10 Years Ago
Memphis area... I'm originally from West Virginia though... talk about mountains...
10 Years Ago
Oh ok ahh I see yes lots of mountains that way just like here:)
Hi, Rebecca. I really liked this line: "You know, our wars are never over
No, they just rearrange the dates". These words just seemed to drop from your willow trees :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
"These words just seemed to drop from your willow trees" Haha! Thank you, so much! That's such an im.. read more"These words just seemed to drop from your willow trees" Haha! Thank you, so much! That's such an imaginative way of putting it. :)
Wow I must say you speak in a deep tone I felt the words, people don't know what that means when you say I felt your words grasp my will, They set as a mountain and reach my span. I like how you used the weeping willow very much. I'm from Tennessee seen many willow tress grow here where water is and when the roots no longer have water they fall apart.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I'm currently living in TN, definitely a lot of inspiration here! Thank you for the review.
Cool what part? sure is go on a mountain take a look and than set back let it all come in:) your ver.. read moreCool what part? sure is go on a mountain take a look and than set back let it all come in:) your very welcome:)
10 Years Ago
Memphis area... I'm originally from West Virginia though... talk about mountains...
10 Years Ago
Oh ok ahh I see yes lots of mountains that way just like here:)
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