That girl next to me

That girl next to me

A Story by Rebecca Dias
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This is a short description of one of my best friends. I thought I could describe her in words to train my writing.

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Those are not just freckles on a pale face. Those are dots that fell from the clouds to make sure she looked like a doll. Those are not just hands lying on that book. Those are fingers on a palm that can form a fist to show a doll can be a warrior too. Those black diamonds that are lying in between her eyelashes are not just eyes. They are tiny little rocks that can see the world in a whole original way. 
And that bipolar personality is what shows humanity that being balanced is just plain boring. The world should see the greatness between a laugh of joy and a shout of anger. Between a cry of sadness and a scream of fear.

© 2013 Rebecca Dias


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Your excellent writing brought a smile to my face. Please, keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rebecca Dias

11 Years Ago

aww thank you that mean a lot to me!

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Added on March 6, 2013
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Tags: friend, girl, doll, freckles, description, mood, bipolar

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Rebecca Dias
Rebecca Dias

Brazil



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Hi! I'm new here! I'm 15 years old. Just a heads-up I have english as my second language, excuse any grammar errors, wrong punctuation or poor vocabulary. I'd love reviews to improve my writing. Than.. more..

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