The Sonet of Shame

The Sonet of Shame

A Poem by Rebecca Dias

What is the point now?
I feel like going on, but how?
When half of your soul just dies
And it makes you cry once or twice

Shame on me, why am I like this?
Getting rid of something you are not going to miss
Instead of looking for death on the shore
Just take the love and make it more

I hate the way you don't hurt like I do
But who can save me? Who?
What is a pair of socks with just one shoe?

I end every sentence with a question mark
I can weep as easily as a dog can bark
I might kill as easily as a shark

© 2013 Rebecca Dias


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Miss Dias, this was cute beyond belief, I felt like scolding the author for being so hard on herself!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nooo, don't kill!! It would be hard to write good works from a jailcell, methinks. Good work! X)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rebecca Dias

11 Years Ago

hahaha thanks
"What is a pair of socks with just one shoe?"
In my opinion, nothing... But you know, that's just me xD

"I canweep as easily as a dog can bark".
Just separate can and weep and your good! :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


Rebecca Dias

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you for pointing that out! Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate it XD

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Added on March 6, 2013
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Tags: poem, poetry, shame, sonet, of, regret, i, hate, how, death

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Rebecca Dias
Rebecca Dias

Brazil



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Hi! I'm new here! I'm 15 years old. Just a heads-up I have english as my second language, excuse any grammar errors, wrong punctuation or poor vocabulary. I'd love reviews to improve my writing. Than.. more..

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