Birth of The Doors Haiku

I like people who shake other people up and make them feel uncomfortable. - Jim Morrison

It’s hot-his name’s Jim

Venice Beach, he reads some poems

Let’s swim to the moon.

Author's Note

The final line belongs to James Douglas Morrison, Poet/Rock Star. Enjoy your 'Moonlight Drive,' Jim.

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I'm not too familiar with the Doors, Rebecca, but I loved your poetry - the line "Let's swim to the moon." is especially appealing. Well done!

[Rebecca Buller]

Thank you, Joyce! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And sit back some time and let The Doors open your mind to new experiences:-)

[s y e]

I loved this Becca - you've written an excellent Haiku

[Rebecca Buller]

Thank you, Ms. Noodles! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...i like your lead-in to his line...

we can swim to the moon in words, in poetry, in song.


jacob

[Rebecca Buller]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)

[Rebecca Buller]

Picture perfect in my mind, and ears...

I enjoyed this one immensely!!! :)
Great little Senryu dear Rebecca :)

- Elisa

[Rebecca Buller]

Thank you, Elisa! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)

You're welcome always! x

[Angi]

The title caught my eye, Rebecca. I am a huge doors fan. You are so right when you said, 'It's hot.' Angi~

[Rebecca Buller]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Angi:-) :-)

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Happy to learn and enjoy the song.

[Rebecca Buller]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peace:-)

[zainul]

This is my pleasure,great poet.

[MsJewel]

A lovely tribute to an amazing poet and musician! Let's swim to the moon...(sigh) beautiful!

:) Julie

[Rebecca Buller]

Thank you for the kind review, Julie! Break on through to the other side:-) (Another good song, btw.)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Jim...*sigh*...I've always loved his talent in terms of being a lyricist. He truly was a poet... Nicely done, my friend!

[Rebecca Buller]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! He truly was a poet first:-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"c'mon baby, light my fire, try to set the world on fire"

then we'll swim.

[Rebecca Buller]

Ha-ha! Sounds like the perfect plan:-)

[Frieda P]

I like those kind of people too, and I LOVE this one Rebecca.....!! Excellent Senryu...and the Doors, sigh....swim to the moon sounds like a plan!

[Rebecca Buller]

I'm glad you enjoyed it:-) Peace:-)