Songbird

Songbird

A Poem by Rebecca James age 10

Bright coloured songbird
Singing to me so sweetly
Blissful for the sun

© 2012 Rebecca James age 10


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A lovely haiku, followng the counted syllables perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca James age 10

12 Years Ago

thank you Marie
ohhhhh how sweet!!
so short yet carrying all that emotion and feelings
loved it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca James age 10

12 Years Ago

thank you so much! :]
Sweet haiku . . .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca James age 10

10 Years Ago

Thanks(: Sorry for the really late reply!
This is so nice. :) Simple, short, and sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rebecca James age 10

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Sorry it took SO long to reply, I forgot my password xD

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Added on December 12, 2012
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Rebecca James age 10
Rebecca James age 10

Atheist, United Kingdom



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