Songbird
A Poem by Rebecca James age 10
Bright coloured songbird
Singing to me so sweetly
Blissful for the sun
© 2012 Rebecca James age 10
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A lovely haiku, followng the counted syllables perfectly.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thank you Marie
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ohhhhh how sweet!!
so short yet carrying all that emotion and feelings
loved it!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thank you so much! :]
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Sweet haiku . . .
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks(: Sorry for the really late reply!
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This is so nice. :) Simple, short, and sweet.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you! Sorry it took SO long to reply, I forgot my password xD
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Added on December 12, 2012
Last Updated on December 12, 2012
Author
Rebecca James age 10Atheist, United Kingdom
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I started this when I was ten and this is some of the writing I did then :) more..
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