Your Look

Looking at you now I'm taken back.

Seeing you every day.

Holding you in my arms.

Kissing your soft sweet lips.

Looking into those beautiful blue eyes.

I remember loosing myself in them for hours.

Your smile.

Brightening up even my darkest day.

The way you'd say I love you.

Making my heart jump every time.

Doing everything I could to be the man you deserved.

Until I made that fatal mistake.

Leaving you for fear of loosing you forever.

I let you go to protect you.

Only for another to catch the woman I love.

Looking at you know.

Looking at him the way you looked at me.

Spending your days with him.

Holding you the same way I did.

Kissing the lips that were mine.

Looking into the eyes I used to get lost in.

Now my love is happy.

But she's happy with another man.

Reviews

[Missy Lorraine]

Very tragic poem. I love that it was written straight from your heart...it always makes for a more interesting piece. Some people may not understand where you're coming from, but I do...I think you know that already though. One thing that I would fix is the flow...it seems way too stacato and the ideas are short and broken up. KNow what I mean?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Quite perfect in nature, well done, good read.

[Morrigan Nicole]

Wow, the last line of this caught me by surprise. Sad but beautiful work. Thanks for the request.

100/100

[Tom]

This is very relevant to me right now. Down to the last detail. Thank you very much

[Beaner166]

Thank you for the review. Ps. She's getting married soon.