choices

life choices are the hardest.

In life,

we are given a choice,

to love or be depressed.

When we get depressed,

we look back and think,

what if?

What if i never fell in love?

What if i never met you?

or What if i were never born?

I have asked these questions often,

and i was never able to answer them.

but now i can, the answer is,

i would not be me.

Author's Note

i want any opinion you have. be 100% honest

Reviews

[Aura Inanna]

First, I'm sorry, but capitalize your i's. Sorry if I sound like a grammar police, but to me, it is distracting.
Other than that, the story the poem tells is a wonderful if not dismal one. The last line fits very well and sounds very smooth, but I have a question. By "I would not be me." did you mean you would choose to become a different person in order to play out your life differently, or did you mean you would choose not to change anything because it would make you someone different?
In the end, wonderful concept and beautiful writing. I love it. :)

[SinnerInspired]

Well, to be honest, I really like this poem We do have a choice but whether we make the right one matters I like it I hope to hear from you in the future