Mornië Alantië (The Coming, And The Fall Of Darkness, Part II)

Second piece inspired by the Elven words from J. R. R. Tolkien's universe: "Mornië Utúlië"("Darkness has come"), and "Mornië Alantië" ("Darkness has fallen"). If you haven't, please read the Part I.

With the tingling morning breeze,

Heading together, out in the dawn,

Bathing our faces in the soft,

Gentle rays of morning sunlight...

Feeling the wind caressing our hair,

Passing trough with the smell of morning dew,

Which makes sleepy grass look like crystals,

Filling our sight with pure perfection of the light spectrum...

Hearing the playful morning greetings of the birds,

Echoing deep in the woods, which still sleep,

Hiding the little of darkness whats left,

Before the light penetrates it's spring clothed roofs...

Seeing the nature waking from its peaceful slumber,

Small animals playfully jumping around in the tall grass,

So calm, weak and innocent, in harmony,

Giving rhythm to the quiet song of the rising dawn...

We ride together,

Our horses galloping happily and wildly along the narrow,

Curved, forest trails,

Under the magical veil of the misty forest...

There i will feel all of this,

The morning breeze, the song of birds,

The tingling of sunlight, the smell of morning dew,

Embraced by you...

I'll fill my senses with you,

Touching your pale, almost white, smooth skin,

Smelling of mint, and morning dew,

As our bodies bond in the forest's gloom...

Author's Note

If you haven't, please read the Part I. Thank you :)

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

lovely imagery.you took me there

[Brianna Brie]

Hmm...your poetry makes nature and love as one. Delightfully beautiful!

[Judy]

A bit epic - and I will definitely read the first part - I know very little about Tolkien - but that makes me a minority - from a poetic point of view this was great - perfectly formatted and great imagery