As I slowly close my eyes...

Written before sleep one night :)

As I slowly close my eyes, 

I think of you, 

And burry you deep inside, 

Filling even the darkest

Fractions of my mind

With your name, 

Echoing like a distant whisper... 

And I dream, 

Sinking in the night's 

Cold, loving embrace...

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Short piece, but it holds plenty of powerful messages. Nighttime and silence always brings us the thoughts of another we long to see or be with. Someone who is not able to be with us at that time. I know this happens to me a lot, thinking about someone who isn't around. Someone who is gone. Just thinking about them will help me fall asleep faster...dream better.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Brief but breathtaking. As a girl, I wanted my lover to have this kind of thoughts ab out me. Haha. Thank you for the smiles. :)

[Ruth]

Beautifully woven imagery here! x

[tyson]

you hit the nail on the head with this one, bravo my friend.