Passion

Passion

A Poem by CrumbsInMyBed

My sun, my light
Your eyes so warm
Melting the ice within my soul
Thought of you all I know
Your touch, your love
Complete tenderness
Every breath, every smile
I release each day
My fire has caught fire
Lit with passion for you

© 2016 CrumbsInMyBed


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Oh, very nice! Full of sweetness.

Posted 7 Years Ago


lilly,

A passion is the driving force for a poem or any work for that matter.But when the passion replaces the soul of it as above reveals how and how deep the writer when it comes to his/her work


excellent attempt


carry on...


mp ramesh

Posted 8 Years Ago


here you not just post a poetry but the clearance of "passionate" song that speaks the heart. very flourishing. so polished & structured with beats. short. simple & brilliant. the real nice feelings of metaphor's heart nicely humming the lullaby of soul -- the soul that craves having a few drops of love but for life. great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Passionate and delighting as well, great wrote.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 15, 2016
Last Updated on July 15, 2016
Tags: love, romance