Passion

My sun, my light

Your eyes so warm

Melting the ice within my soul

Thought of you all I know

Your touch, your love

Complete tenderness

Every breath, every smile

I release each day

My fire has caught fire

Lit with passion for you

Reviews

[Ballpark Frank]

Oh, very nice! Full of sweetness.

[M P Ramesh]

lilly,

A passion is the driving force for a poem or any work for that matter.But when the passion replaces the soul of it as above reveals how and how deep the writer when it comes to his/her work


excellent attempt


carry on...


mp ramesh

[Adam Adams]

here you not just post a poetry but the clearance of "passionate" song that speaks the heart. very flourishing. so polished & structured with beats. short. simple & brilliant. the real nice feelings of metaphor's heart nicely humming the lullaby of soul -- the soul that craves having a few drops of love but for life. great job!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Passionate and delighting as well, great wrote.