"Breaking and Entering"

"Breaking and Entering"

A Poem by masqued_muse
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hmm. Just a memory, perhaps?

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   To sit beside; but not inside,
      as space embraces sound.
    To spare the air; but not the glare,
       to claw,
       where nothing's bound.
    Here; the last disrobing known,
       familiar frenzied feed,
    There; opposing, smiling stone,
       porcelain can't bleed.

© 2011 masqued_muse


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masqued_muse
Do what you do...^^

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could mean anything i guess!
nicely written,
almost a bit of a riddle really.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love or lust
With softness or a Grecian bust...
Your writing is all over the place in all it suggests and visions. I'm enjoying it especially because one never knows what is next. Write on!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very thought provoking.... like an ancient riddle containing hidden wisdom...

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem left me curious but fulfilled as each line opens a door of imagery deep and dark. It was a exotic sort of read that sits well with this reader.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the poem. Each line holding mystery and create thoughts. Every line had reason and purpose. Type of poetry that create thinking. I like them the most. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 21, 2011
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masqued_muse
masqued_muse

Baytown, TX



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