"Query"

Questions; unresolved, the inhabitants of heaven may reveal....in time.

Resonance;the birth of sound,
collides with cosmic scream.
Butterflies caged underground,
resurfacing from dream.
Mesmerized by lost defense;
passion’s lust for chance;
careening stars,the evidence,
freedom leads this dance.
Instruments caressed by hands;
souls stirred and awakened,
times shift like burning sand,
universe is shaken.
Beautiful, impending doom
scars the astral planes.
One voice decorates a room,
someone smiles, again.
Splendid orchestrations;
dissonance unwanted.
Hearts in celebration,
angels still, are haunted….

Author's Note

Reviews are requested, honesty preferred..

Reviews

[...]

stunning poetry
incredibly expressive
these conflicts are often
afraid of our clarity of thought
except that it takes us a while
to find out
meanwhile, there's poetry

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love the rhyme throughout. Nice work.

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"Beautiful, impending doom
scars the astral planes."
The imagery that you hurled force with those two lines sent me flying into oblivion. I am definitely impressed by this work. There is the sweet infusion of blood and melody which makes the work sanguine.
The last line was a great revelation to the reader.
"angels still, are haunted..."

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. So many lines open up many new questions.
"Mesmerized by lost defense;
passion’s lust for chance;
careening stars,the evidence,
freedom leads this dance."
Life is to be lived. Easy to get lost. Hard to keep on the right road and be able to see beauty in the dirt of life. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[ScaryTrees]

A lovely cacophony
Beautiful words, a nice write